January 17, 2003

Skid 21

very like its ignorance
kid torched the air
passable semblance of rhyme
alike to fury
canticle abstractness
for a millennium of kicks
alice relax
able but unwilling
thrush, massachusetts farmhouses
as loops or rolls
gravity defends
with a protestant pride

you'd want to commit
for the sake of sanguinity
obvious
to the feral ransacker
there was a book behind it
degrading support
green levels split for two reds
in michael's vestpocket
peach kills
greek orthodox news
delight in the seasons
packaged for nome export

ullulate nether equanimity
satellite dishes
on the sprawling gorse
six toes was not an animal
akin to lichen
talentless, denuded of commitment
being beige and fog
fishwifing
on the slivers of big screen
touching down in dry gulch
paused
to fund medium-sized glands

Posted by Brian Stefans at January 17, 2003 05:59 PM
Comments

These skid poems seem very encodedly personal to me. I like them. And I like how knowing a little bit about you gives me moments of decryption. How do you hear the prosody? Fast or slow? Druggy? And if so which drug?

Posted by: Nada at January 17, 2003 11:15 PM

I guess they are "encrypted," though my sense is that when they are most candid they are also simply not telling the truth. The prosody shifts for each poem, but mostly I'm falling back on some standard syncopation a la Raworth or Creeley, mostly the former. Had I more time with each I'd try something more unusual, with interior formal constraints. Even the most LangPo ones seem to have more to do with a poet like Trakl (as ambiguous yet "foreboding" landscapes) and, say, Auden (in their cheeky, darkish approaches to fairly humanistic concerns), though as usual there's a look to Pound's earlier, sparer lyrics ("Dance Figure," etc.). Well, I wouldn't take them too seriously, just five-finger exercises; the original idea was to try to write like John Wieners! I hope to revise the better ones at a later date. Thanks for reading.

Posted by: Mr. Arras at January 18, 2003 11:05 AM